You recently received a letter from your bank that should have contained a new credit card. Unfortunately, the card was not in the letter.
Write a letter to your bank manager. In your letter,
explain what happened
suggest that the credit card should be cancelled for security reasons
ask when a new credit card can be sent
Dear Sir/Madam,
This is with reference to your letter dated 12 August, 2020 which contained by new credit card. I regret to inform you that when I found the letter, I found it in a dilapidated and worn out condition. When I opened the letter, I was not surprised to note that it did not have the credit card as mentioned in the letter. I was so looking forward to suing my new credit card.
Since credit cards are susceptible to mis-use, I would like to suggest that the card be cancelled with immediate effect for security reasons.
I was looking forward to using my new card and hence would like to know when the new card can be re-sent to me. May I request you to do so at the earliest, as I am handicapped without a card and paying in cash for all my requirements isn’t an option that I prefer.
I look forward to your prompt response.
Thanks and regards,
Pam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2020'.
Suggestion: August 2020
... with reference to your letter dated 12 August, 2020 which contained by new credit card. I r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, may, so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34756097561 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.496003647 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0669877296 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2222222222 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399932239494 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156718401937 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103340454974 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214472824831 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129863227896 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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