You have lost an item of value on train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter.
1. Describe the item.
2. Explain when and where you left it.
3. Say what actions you would like the company to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report my lost luggage in yesterday’s AHM-BOM Durando Express and would like to inquire if anyone has turned it over in your office.
My luggage is a small sky-blue Nike bag with Indigo travel sticker attached on it. It also has a white bag tag with my name and contact details on the right side of the bag. Not only, it contains my precious life-long achievement certificates but also, immeasurable worth of last photographs of my grand parents which are so much precious for me.
Yesterday evening, I took a train from Bombay and stored my bag inside the top left cabin of my birth ‘C’ which is in 24-A. After reaching home, it was only then I came to know about by left-behind luggage.
I would like to kindly ask if you could give me an advice if my bag is already in your custody or if someone have brought it in your station office. You may reach me anytime through my mobile number 9876543210. Also, please send it through Fed-Ex courier services as I am willing to bear all the expenses.
I hope you will take this matter seriously.
Your faithfully,
Sunny Mehta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Nike) must be used with a third-person verb: 'bags'.
Suggestion: bags
...e. My luggage is a small sky-blue Nike bag with Indigo travel sticker attached on ...
^^^
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s already in your custody or if someone have brought it in your station office. You ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53201970443 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50350042499 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4284751611 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6363636364 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136743772204 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549449424729 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599170300603 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087482147159 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577049649935 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.