Dear Tina,
I received your letter yesterday and realise that you have faced some problem at your workplace. I’m glad that you reached out to me for your problem. Firstly, there is absolutely no need to worry about whatever has happened. As you already know that I have been in the same situation before, I totally understand your difficulty.
In my case, I was asked to manage three person’s work along with my work for almost two months. I was said that recruitments are in process and I will be relieved from the burden soon, but it didn’t happen for three months. Since the pressure was affecting my health and personal life, I took the courage and spoke to my Supervisor. Thankfully, my problem was heard and taken into consideration within a week.
As you are facing similar trouble, I would suggest you to speak to your boss about the stress that you are facing. If he is unavailable, at least drop an email describing the issue. I am sure your boss will hear you and have some solution.
Do let me know if you need my help in anything else. I’d be happy to help you!
Your dear friend,
Shilpa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...In my case, I was asked to manage three person’s work along with my work for almost tw...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.592039801 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48601942209 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5866089237 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427102673251 0.216113520407 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150001090296 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125587901953 0.0603063233224 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229608955366 0.12726935374 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139863615466 0.0580467560999 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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