Dear Jane,
Nice to know you're planning to spend a few days in the moutains. It's such a delightful decision, considering this dreadful COVID-19 pandemic that locked us down for months.
I guarantee you it would be an unforgettable experience: just thinking about the natural beauties, fresh air, and starry sky. And the most wonderful things is that it will definitely be refreshing, save you from daily stressful stuff, and reengergize you. You will come home feeling relaxed and renewed.
Having said that, there are also some drawbacks to which you should pay attention. Mountain gears can be expensive, and you need some skills to use them properly. Besides, the weather can ruin your holiday, if it rains all the days. Do check the forecast before you decide whether to go camping or not.
As it can be dangerous to go alone, make sure you invite some friends with you or camp with your family members. I would be more than happy to spend some days with you, if I am invited.
Feel free to drop me a line, if you need more information.
Lots of love,
Kevin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Jane, Nice to know youre planning to spend a few days in the mou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75531914894 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51212541604 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712765957447 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9528228659 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231171769067 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069562345076 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622334223924 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111137359136 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635159034309 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.