You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think your current place of residence is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague.
Explain why you are shifting out
Describe your accommodation
Explain why it is suitable for your friend
Dear Naina,
I hope you and your family are doing great. As you know that i have been a resident in Delhi from the last few years, and it has been a fabulous experience staying in this paying guest facility, where most of the guests came from the English speaking countries to either work or exploration.
I am writing this letter to you because i am planning to move out next month, as i got a transfer to Bangalore due to my recent promotion, and I got to know that since you have also got an internal transfer from The United State to New Delhi within the organization, and you are looking for a place to move in, this place would be ideal for you, as it would be more convenient for you to live not only because you will accompany by other English speaking people since you are more comfortable communicating in English, but also it is quite close to your new office address.
If you want, i can introduce you to my landlord. While he is a quite generous and understanding person, he would also assist you a lot during your movement.
Let me know if you need any further information regarding this occupancy. I would certainly arrange it for you.
Best regards
Harpreet
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-08-16 | nainsi1991@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2020-08-16 | randhawa.harpreet91@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2020-08-16 | randhawa.harpreet91@gmail.com | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I am writing this letter to you because i am planning to move out next month, as ...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... am planning to move out next month, as i got a transfer to Bangalore due to my r...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ur new office address. If you want, i can introduce you to my landlord. While...
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Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge it for you. Best regards Harpreet
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53240740741 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57869539197 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.636721153 44.8134815571 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.375 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317998647028 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129285504202 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827111730027 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187984213849 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589673217213 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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