Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planet and some want to send messages to send them. Others think that these life forms may be too dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the development of space technology, it is possible for mankind to start space exploration. Some people argue that reaching out to extraterrestrials can bring benefits to the human beings, while the others think it is detrimental to contact with aliens. This essay will go into both sides and provide my perspective.
Communicating with extraterrestrial intelligences may help solving practical issues in our society. For instance, global concerns, such as pollution, starvation and wealth disparity, have been bothering the public for years but scientists still failed to find solutions for these problems. However, any extraterrestrial civilization is likely to be more advanced than us and they may have successfully solved the global problems that we are experiencing. By learning from their civilization, we can adopt their solution for these concerns, thereby improving the public’s living standard.
However, the argument above can be viewed from a different angle. Since people have no knowledge of the civilization that the scientists reach out to, the consequence of this act remain unknown. The mankind will be exposed to the risk of being exploited and manipulated if the aliens that we reach out to are hostile and more advanced than us. For example, extraterrestrial intelligences may take away our natural resources and colonize our planets, which will bring detrimental affects to the human beings.
Personally, I believe that sending messages to the aliens can benefit our future generation as it will pave the path to cosmic immigration. Since the natural resources is limited and the population is growing rapidly, our society may reach a point where the earth can no long handle the population density. By exploring the space and communicating with extraterrestrial intelligences, we are likely to find a planet that is suitable for our living. In the future, immigrating to another planet will no longer be a dream.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...extraterrestrial intelligences may help solving practical issues in our society. For in...
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Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...improving the public’s living standard. However, the argument above can be viewe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40983606557 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23535959878 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1046459303 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131785027934 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439539255666 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265695798413 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078786371832 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00592684236289 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.