Robuscus are evolved from
Reading gives evidence that robuscus are not hunting animals and they are just scavengers. But the lecturer casts doubt on this and gives many examples to prove.
First of all, reading states that the stomach of robustus contains remains of psittacosaurus dinosaurs
, which suggests that they are hunters. But lecturer argues stating that robusts are bigger than baby citizker, so they can be easily eaten by them, which gives evidence that they are not just scavengers but hunters too. Moreover, the dianuser in the stomach of ribusts are twice less the mass of robustus.
Secondly, reading suggests that robustus legs are so short that they cannot run fast to be a good hunter. But Lecturer totally disagrees and he says that by giving an example of another animal, Tezanian Devil. He says this animal too has short legs but still can run even faster at speed of 15km and are successful predators too. So ancient mammals like Robustus could also be a good hunter.
Furthermore, passage tells that the animal eaten by robustus has no teeth indentation in their bones and if they are hunted then teeth marking could be seen in them. However, the lecturer contradicts the statement and he says that the robustus has powerful jaws and even though they have back teeth, they were never used by them to chew. Instead, they swallowed the whole prey or as a mass.So bones would never show any markings on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 241.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88796680498 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34931801383 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4031972049 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1666666667 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0156688611684 0.272083759551 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00913688223621 0.0996497079465 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303036101312 0.0662205650399 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0148668529176 0.162205337803 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297337058351 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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