The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that unlimited freedom of citizens would impair our society so that we should come up with rules and laws in our daily life. In my opinion, I totally agree with this idea.
Rules and laws provide us with protection so that our rights and safety can get a guarantee. For instance, businessmen should obey specific rules while transferring goods and be honest so that each other can achieve the same goal. Besides, rules and laws make sure that people’s behaviours are not beyond the red line, in this way, the stability of society can be maintained. People who try to overstep the boundary will get punishment and even be put into jails. Rules and laws can also make us behave in manner on many occasions, as the ancient Chinese master Confucius said, one man must treat his master as his master and treat his father as his father.
Rules and laws can also protect the disadvantaged groups, such as the disabled, the young, women, and the old. They are often the ones who be offended and be hurt by others, rules and laws are scherms for these citizens so they can live more comfortably. Rules and laws also guaranteed fairness between power people and others, for example, people pay tax to the government depend on their incomes, richer people pay more so that the gap between different hierarchies can be reduced to some extent. In this way, the government can perfect public insurances and make society run better.
In conclusion, I am for that rules and laws are necessary for our life for sure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.734082397 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40313471539 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8723727581 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12702542983 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537455512956 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03044811852 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839886171454 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250548073991 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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