In several cultural circumstances, children are imparted an idea that telling them that they will definitely achieve their goals if they do as best as they can. Although this belief has a huge power of motivation, some negative effects would still emerge if children are guided properly. The following article will discuss the advantages and disadvantages that come to children along with this powerful idea.
The benefit is obvious, this statement could stimulate millions of children and help them succeed. It could be the reason that most of the time, there’s only one encouragement between success and failure. On the one hand, for those children who are born with some certain talents, if some people encourage them with this idea, they may get achievements more quickly with more future potential. On the other hand, this idea could help a child build his confidence, for example, if he is keen on something and has acquired the basic skills, but it is very difficult to handle it very well. However, it might have a side effect under certain conditions.
If the starting point is wrong or following the false instructions, this belief has a high probability to make them regret in their later lives. If they follow this statement and try so many times and fail in the end, they might be injured mentally and lose their confidence. Moreover, if they plan to do something illegal, for example, get money through improper methods, also they are taught by this idea when they are young without correct guidance, huge mistakes would be made.
In conclusion, this encouragement would bring huge positive effects, but it should be remembered that negatives sides also exist. There’s no good or bad, the matter is how children are guided along with this idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02033898305 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60095224866 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2525774701 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292869758433 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101768967595 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821516100214 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182899133282 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947384572126 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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