You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
Say where you think you left the papers
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want he/she to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Tara W and I am writing to ask for your help of some important papers that I left at the hotel.
I attended the two-day meeting at your hotel yesterday. Thus I had spent a day and a night in room B102. Until I came back home, I realized I had left my papers in the hotel room. These papers were noted and have a blue cover. I remember that I put them into the cabinet beside the bed at night, but I left without checking in the next morning.
These documents are very crucial to my work at the moment. My colleagues and I had spent a month for preparation and record, therefore, it can not be redone. To make matter worse, I did not make any copies of these.
As you can imagine, I am extremely in need of these papers. I would be very grateful if you could send the papers to my address. I highly appreciate your help and kindness. Please contact me on my phone number whenever you have any related information. I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...wo-day meeting at your hotel yesterday. Thus I had spent a day and a night in room B...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25789473684 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43931896404 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.780703412 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.7857142857 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28815066565 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827623515656 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737002424661 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16733659126 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893827818613 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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