Dear ,
You spent a good vacation on a cruise a year ago. You met an old couple there.
Suddenly, you brought them to your mind.
Write a letter to an old couple. In your letter
-give your greetings to them.
-describe something you enjoyed with them.
-tell them what you plan to do in the future.
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Moon,
Hello, I am Darby whom you met in a princess cruise from 25th of January, 2014 to 8th of February, 2014, and then I went to the cruise with my girlfriend whose name is Moon as well. I am writing this letter to give my best regards to you. I am not sure that you can remember me. However, I have thought you sometimes when I saw some pictures which were taken in the cruise.
My girlfriend who is my wife now and I really appreciated you because you were very kind to us. I think that we were only Koreans in the cruise. Therefore, although we were awkward and we were not...
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