Dear ,
You spent a good vacation on a cruise a year ago. You met an old couple there.
Suddenly, you brought them to your mind.
Write a letter to an old couple. In your letter
-give your greetings to them.
-describe something you enjoyed with them.
-tell them what you plan to do in the future.
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Moon,
Hello, I am Darby whom you met in a princess cruise from 25th of January, 2014 to 8th of February, 2014, and then I went to the cruise with my girlfriend whose name is Moon as well. I am writing this letter to give my best regards to you. I am not sure that you can remember me. However, I have thought you sometimes when I saw some pictures which were taken in the cruise.
My girlfriend who is my wife now and I really appreciated you because you were very kind to us. I think that we were only Koreans in the cruise. Therefore, although we were awkward and we were not...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 10
No. of Words: 230 200
No. of Characters: 937 1000
No. of Different Words: 135 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.894 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.074 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.324 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.965 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.389 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.588 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.261 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4