The continued rise in the world's w is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the causes of the continued rise ?do you agree that it is the greatest problems faced by humanity.
The continued rise in the world's w is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are
In this contemporary Era, proportion of population has been being bombed by swiftly. The frequently incline in the Plant's inhabitants is the considerable problems faced by humanity at the continuous time. I will discuss cause of the continued rise citizens and i agree with the statement.
To embark with,it has been mode point of discussion -how population is increasing because of that ,there are plethora of problems faced by humanity : unemployment, much space for living; anddue to rising population effects upon people, like people are going poverty line those who are unemployment. For an example, in South countries , there people are not much Cognizant about increasing inhabitants because people are uneducated and they do not know what's the problems can be seen in future. Due to increasing population , that is the way South countries are suffering from money; food and unemployment.
Moreover, second greatest cause is people's cognisun because those who educated there areas population of inhabitants in low vis-a' - vis to other areas I agree with the major problem suffered by humanity. Apart from that, government of any countries they ought to make policy - free seminar for problems of incline population and give free knowledge about inhabitants how to they can decline also give free education. The epitome of this, in India population has been ballooning, nevertheless, everyone gets what they want : job; batter living area; related to education and new policy made by Indian government because of that, people become Pandit and mature to mitigate these are the problems also Nation's growth is booming.
To conclude ,there are humongous of cause behind inclined population ,but the major source are awareness and less knowledge in education. If every country wants their population would be decline so they ought to make new policy related to decreasing population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31230283912 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81102617005 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8046994216 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306074920555 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154353234312 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225376486182 0.0667982634062 337% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285313420489 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.300869802418 0.056905535591 529% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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