The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart compares the electricity production and consumption in ten highest countries in 2014.
It is clear that China is highest in both production and consumption of electricity, the billion kwh of electricity of the USA is the second highest. The consumption of electricity in Germany is more than production. The figure of Korea, Rep. are lowest among 10 countries.
China is the top one country that produced 5398 billion kWh electricity while people were using 5322 billion kWh electricity. The production and consumption of electricity in United States is around 300 billion kWh and 1500 less than China. The billion kWh of production and consumption of electricity are roughly equal in Russia at 1057 and 1038 respectively.
Germany is the only country that used more electricity than produced. The consumption of electricity was just under 500 billion kWh in Canada, France, Brazil and Korea, Rep. only 485.1 and 449.5 billion kWh of production and consumption electricity which is the lowest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29012345679 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0289526546 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475308641975 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2199182435 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208076877722 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101587890158 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977692871967 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186904830894 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116156313643 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.