Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children are the master of future. It is said that what type of education they receive, what type of society it could be, so giving children a complete, proper experience shall be a important job that parents need to provide. Thus, I recommend that Children should be required to help their parents with household tasks.
Developing right characteristic, teaching correct concept, giving everyone a sensation about sharing the house chore in order to reduce the among of errands their parents is the best environment which we can leave our future master in. For instance, our last generation, almos...
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Sentence: As children think all the tasks are so easy that nothing they can't tackle down, they are definitely on the correct track that lead them toward the bright, glory and graceful wonderland.
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