You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter,
• describe the problem with the equipment
• explain how this problem is affecting your work
• say what you want the shop or company to do
August 19th, 2020
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to complaint about a Dell Laptop I purchased two months ago from your store.
As for the problems, there are two errors that I want to mention. Firstly, the product has suddenly stopped working, the screen does not show anything, just display blue screen. I really need this laptop to complete my work. Another is the device can not connect with the wireless. So it is difficult for me to find out something on the internet.
In term of effects, if my laptop does not work, I am unable to work. Besides, I have a number of important files, and software on this laptop which means I am stuck without them. Finally, I have a valid guarantee card, this device has a year warranty. Therefore, it is still under warranty. I am hoping you would repair it within three days or replace a new one and transfer the data.
I hope you consider my suggestions as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
TOM
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, really, so, still, therefore, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59302325581 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51160099038 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0854900606 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7692307692 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158838277832 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500501251402 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363074678527 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842455406358 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326480863679 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.