Most of the countries are currently facing problems with differences in the educational curriculum across the nation. Author argues such and claims that before entering into the college every student should study the same curriculum. I mostly agree with author for the two reasons, which i will elucidate below. However, I do concede that there might be a few exceptions to this prompt.
First of all, pre college students should have similar educational system. Because, colleges require some pre-requiste skills and knowledge before they enter into the college. For instance, if students who join college after their secondary schooling have studied different subjects under different curiculum they cannot coup up with the subjects in the college and they might not have the pre-requisite knowledge which the college want from the students who join their college. So, if entire nation has similar type of subjects before they enter college they can meet particular pre-requiste skills suggested by college.
Additionally, Students should study under same educational system before they join college. Because, courses by provided by college are the extension to the subjects which students learned in thier secondary school eduation. For instance, if students from different schooling background joins college, the college which might have extension to subjects in some particular curriculam system then students who are from different curriculum may be affected and it would also be difficult for teachers to teach students. This might have a serious effect on students carrer. So, every country should have same subjects in schooling so that students do not face problems when they enter to the college.
Undoubtedly, curriculum also has to based on the subjects acknowledgement level. All students cannot grasp equally. So students who might learn slowly can have different curriculum from students who can learn fastly. To conclude, entire nation should have similar curriculum for the mentioned above two reasons and however, I also mentioned exception where if an country has students with differnet intelligence level.
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news During this time period most of the complain 49
- A nation should require all its students to study the same curriculum before entering college 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'subjects'' or 'subject's'?
Suggestion: subjects'; subject's
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, as to, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55521472393 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70161822136 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460122699387 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 73.0406816539 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.529411765 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364458607046 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137721253882 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103907137383 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241933805551 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287215951056 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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