Working long hours causes a great deal of stress and can be very bad for the health. The government must find a way to reduce this type of stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
As the pressures generated from heavy workload impact negatively on the health of the workers, many people believe that authorities should have responsibilities to alleviate this problem. In my opinion, I totally agree with this perspective due to the productivity factor and social effects.
It is true that long hours working not only causes stress to workers but can reduce their concentration on work, which could affect on the working productivity. To be more specific, because of the limited amount of time that people can fully focus, workers can easily make mistakes or mishandle some of their tasks if they can not get appropriate break time. Therefore, the working performance will be decreased that can lead to losses to organizations. In addition, many workers might find themselves dissatisfied with their working environment, as a result, many of them possibly quit their jobs or overlook the responsibilities. As a result, the outcomes of companies can be deteriorated.
Moreover, people working under pressures are likely to have several issues related to mental illnesses. With a great number of working forces having unstable mentality, the societies might face unrest and crisisses. Therefore, governments will have to pour financial resources into social centres in order to deal with this uprising issue. This would cause huge deficits in government funds, which should have been used in other crucial aspects such as education or infrastructures. To some extent, due to thick working schedules, young people cannot balance their daily life, therefore, they are likely to get married in older ages, which could cause the decrease in birth rate.
In conclusion, because of aforementioned rationales, which lead to several adversities, authorities should come up with appropriate measurements to resolve this adverse phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...heir concentration on work, which could affect on the working productivity. To be more sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52280701754 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06711627039 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.41297491 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216758900657 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740326823205 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559091763621 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102143102091 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655538801145 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.