In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in some others, the government pay for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages?
Since education places an essential part in the development of a country, there are many debatable arguments related to whether the fees for tertiary education should be paid by the government or individuals have been lit. In my opinion, I believe that the benefits of delivering free access to education for every citizen overshadow the drawbacks.
It is true that fully paying for college or university fees will lead to shortages of resources, which could be spent on developing infrastructures or investing in industries. As a result, governments are unlikely to have money to expand the domestic economy when it comes to globalization. However, this drawback can be easily compensated by international investments attracted by well-educated labor forces, since the majority of citizens and get access to tertiary education. Therefore, the government can earn extra resources to spend on other essential aspects. For example, Finland where university and college are free for citizens, it has become an investing hub for every start-up company and an ideal country for students from around the world come to study. These are the major incomes for the local government.
Moreover, this movement enhances equality in society. By offering all citizens chances to study in tertiary systems, getting high education is no longer a privilege of the upper classes. Therefore, this helps to reduce the gaps among social classes, which helps to avoid unrest among society. For instance, Finland has been the country, which has the highest happiness degree of citizens, as a result, there is no crisis for years. Besides, higher education levels among citizens can result in lower crime rates. Because most people get proper degrees and certificates, they are likely to get well-paid jobs. As a result, it not only solves unemployment but also leads to the fact that citizens will not involve in illegal activities for livelihoods.
In conclusion, governments should pay for university fees. By doing this, a country can get more advantages than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33538461538 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94754777227 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1697764385 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192010006527 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632547548328 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783375269714 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14659895788 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105286990795 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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