"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Young people are the future of any society. They grow up to supplant the important positions in various sectors including government, academia and industry. For any society to have good quality leaders, the young people should be instilled with qualities which would aid them in this process. In modern times, cooperation is one such quality which is required in various levels in government and industry because both them comprises of workforce from variety of backgrounds and diversity and have various departments. Providing this quality of cooperation to young people at a young age can prove providential.
In any government organisation, there are many departments which need to work in resonance in order to ensure smooth runnning of governmental operations. To exemplify, the Indian government has several ministeries who need to work in sync with each other. The railway department needs to cooperate with finance ministry for fund allocation. The defence ministry needs to cooperate with Science and Technology ministry for bringing in new technology to the military. The leaders of these departments should have collabarative approach rather than a competetive approach in order to solve the challenging problems occuring in the department. Therefore, preparing the young people for these positions should include imbibing a sense of cooperation in them.
Further, not only in government organisations but any industrial organisation also consists of various departments for smooth operations. For example, any company operating in selling of a particular product in general has an R&D department, the sales and marketing department, the advertisement department, the HR department. The collective effort of these deparments leads to a successful functioning of the company. A leader of the company or even the leader of one particular department of the company needs to have the attitude of cooperating with the other divisions, which will otherwise prove bad for the company's functioning.
Although the sense of cooperation is important at various stages of operations in government and industry, a healthy competition can be beneficial as well. For example, a competetion of various municipalities for the award of cleanest city could only prove to have positive effects on cities' cleanliness. Industries of the same sector need to compete with each for market share. This inspires companies to launch better products and apply better marketing strategies. In these cases, a sense of competition is necessaary for performing better and making a positive impact on the society.
Cooperation is a necessary element of smooth function of various departments in various industrial and governmental organisations. Imparting a sense of cooperation to young leader will prepare them for the leadership positions in these organisations. But, a healthy competition is also an important component of functioning of these organisation. Thus, while being cooperative in their efforts, young leaders should be trained to participate in healthy competition in order to make a positive impact on the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...vernment and industry because both them comprises of workforce from variety of backgrounds a...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ging in new technology to the military. The leaders of these departments should hav...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the cleanest'.
Suggestion: of the cleanest
...of various municipalities for the award of cleanest city could only prove to have positive ...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
... only prove to have positive effects on cities cleanliness. Industries of the same sec...
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Line 9, column 328, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this organisation' or 'these organisations'?
Suggestion: this organisation; these organisations
...n important component of functioning of these organisation. Thus, while being cooperative in their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 12.9106741573 271% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2647.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59619450317 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22267670317 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463002114165 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 835.2 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2161878107 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.291666667 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7083333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29166666667 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262762952217 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820235740399 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637715478609 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156901538451 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280017760823 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.