Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
People today spend considerable of their time to media, as to American Research Statistics (min. 7.5h a day respectively). Within the movie, TV series or entertainment shows that attract thousands of people’s attention, the advertisements also service for people beyond just advertising, for relaxation cases as well. As to its broaden opportunity, should Governments let people watch whatever our economy market offers even if there are immoral scenes or inadmissible events? Alternatively, is not it high time to struggle against showing unacceptable advertisements? In this essay, I will open detrimental effects of this to society and give suggestions to address the problem constructively.
The first thing to consider is children. Parents today may limit their children on watching different kinds of cartoon films or movies, but cannot strict on watching advertisements. However, they are very light, amusing and funny at the time, which may have more harm than the use after all. These type of advertisements lead to children putting pressure on their parents to buy the exact thing as advertised or at least, they are easily influenced by the advertisement that is not appropriable. Therefore, advertisings aimed at children should be controlled or even banned.
Next thing to get into consideration is, along with wicked scenes, advertisements get participation on our eating also. There are lots of scenarios on not certificated drinks and uncolorious fast foods. In that case, there should be taken immediate decision on displaying warning on product advertisements that can be inappropriate and risk to our health. In addition, alcoholic scenes or product showings should be displaced.
Nevertheless, alongside of disadvantages of our topic subject, it has a great positive impact on our economic. It is just one of the main point and a crucial part of the modern business. It is useful because thanks to what we have a great choice. Nonetheless, matters like health and children’s right upbringing are by no means inestimable compared to the profit that advertisements bring.
To sum up, advertising is necessary in free market economics and has enough evil if not controlled. It should be regulated and censored for illegal information or products that are harmful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, after all, as to, at least, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43417366947 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28412946752 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633053221289 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2639024133 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.380952381 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136630013522 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348143359221 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358629799754 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642060531774 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243002193047 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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