Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
In the 21st century we are surrounded by the numerous advertisements where in it is undeniable that some advertisement methods are inappropriate as well as not acceptable for community. I strongly concur with the above statement ,the following paragraphs shall discuss on it and lead to a logical conclusion.
On the first hand, nowadays we see various advertisement through Newspaper, visual- media, and street-hoarding all of which provide information regarding to some product which can be irritating to the common man. In other words, they may not be willing to see those adverts or not like that items for their own reasons. For instance, on roadside the advertisement of tobacco ,cigarette and other addictive items which have bad effects on human body so straightforward persons do not want to see this type of adverts hence, such adverts are improper and impermissible for the society at large.
Furthermore, every household has television so many commercials are shown which may not be appropriate for small children. In addition , due to advancement in technology advertisement companies send their advertise directly on mobile phones and such undesirable products can also disturb, not only children but also youngsters’ mind and they unknowingly they may get trapped into it there by learning immoral activities To exemplify , all humans have exposure to visual media such as television , computer, mobile phone for using Face book and other social media website and these platforms may have a number of sources available which promote items and finally individuals mind get trapped there.
To conclude , most of the time adverts showing on wrong platform and influence individuals to buy or see wrong items and products. In my opinion ,there are multiple ways by which advertisement company approach their buyer so they have to choose the proper-way of in order to protect morals and values of society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31475409836 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06166930589 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609836065574 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.516068235 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.111111111 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8888888889 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.1111111111 7.06120827912 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110441262175 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456347007821 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433339717234 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721297295249 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371282438951 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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