Some people believe that the government should be responsible for taking care of disadvantaged members of society like unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree?
With the economy changes and the supply demand change, world requirements are changing. In these context governments responsibilities to care about the people is getting increase. Some people think that, government should provide the solutions for the disadvantaged members or care them on government aids. I totally disagreed on the comment and I believe that, government have some extend responsibility but it is limited.
As a government, major responsibilities are security, health and the education while keep on going sustainable economy to their people. Therefore, to have a better future as an investment governments are much more care about childhood education and people health. For example, some countries are providing free health and education systems. In addition, infrastructure development takes huge investment and proper usage is citizen responsibility. Considering these, it is people responsibility to develop own skills and engage in employment while supporting to the country’s economy.
On the other hand, government should have clear futuristic policies of caring all the citizens. Especially they should have a balance economy, which will help to create employment for the different skill categories and align the education system to use countries existing recourses productively. This will creates job opportunities and provides room to have more employments. For example, by restricting some goods, which can made in-house may give economical befits as well as job opportunities. Therefore, government have responsibility on disadvantaged members due to the lack of political concepts to drive the society on correct way by aligning them to the right path.
Finally, be a disadvantaged may due to the bad governments policies and due to the fault on members attitude. Therefore, we as a people should have clear future goals on own carrier to be a weightless person to the motherland even government did it or not. On conclusion, I think, it is a own responsibility to care abort ourselves with existing environment.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...nd I believe that, government have some extend responsibility but it is limited. As a...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ty, health and the education while keep on going sustainable economy to their people. Th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...sting recourses productively. This will creates job opportunities and provides room to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'members'' or 'member's'?
Suggestion: members'; member's
...nments policies and due to the fault on members attitude. Therefore, we as a people sho...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t or not. On conclusion, I think, it is a own responsibility to care abort oursel...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55271565495 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35160977456 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1489827744 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342956279597 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106762998222 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862262598189 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216604664679 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905496246309 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...nd I believe that, government have some extend responsibility but it is limited. As a...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ty, health and the education while keep on going sustainable economy to their people. Th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...sting recourses productively. This will creates job opportunities and provides room to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'members'' or 'member's'?
Suggestion: members'; member's
...nments policies and due to the fault on members attitude. Therefore, we as a people sho...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t or not. On conclusion, I think, it is a own responsibility to care abort oursel...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55271565495 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35160977456 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1489827744 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342956279597 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106762998222 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862262598189 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216604664679 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905496246309 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.