You read a newspaper article that captured your attention. Write letter to your friend and recommend reading the article. Include the following in your letter:
– Where and when the article was published
– What the article was about
– Why it is important that your friend reads it.
Dear Jack,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you and your family happy and hearty. I'm writing this letter to let you know about one significant article which was quite impressive, and I'd like you to go through it.
As reading newspaper is my routine habit, when I was reading the Times of India on August 25th, an article published in Health column attracted my attention because of its heading "Now or Never". That article was written by a famous physician Dr Sam Richard from Canada. I've found it quite informative when I read it in detail.
That article was about the current burning health issue: Obesity. Dr Richard has not only highlighted possible causes but also provided plausible measures to get out of it. He has nicely articulated how our sedentary lifestyle and eating habits deteriorates health. Moreover, he suggested simple lifestyle modifications and changes in routine diet to reduce cholesterol levels.
As you are also suffering from hyperglycemia, I think you will be greatly benefited if you spend time and read it. Moreover, as suggested in an article, if you inculcate the habits of morning walk and yoga in your routine, you could save yourself from life-threatening infirmities such as heart attack and blockage of artery and so on.
Hope you will read this article and let me know how you will find it.
Best regards,
Emma
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is impor 56
- Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go Write a letter to the head teacher In your letter Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what 73
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- Nowadays pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly How does this affect ordinary people What steps can be taken to overcome this problem 73
- The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. School should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, i think, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75893804396 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6797753945 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321142207631 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967519528787 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785391804479 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169937773599 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07749633198 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.