You have recently taken a two-day course. Write to give your feedback to the course organiser and say
-Give details of the course
-What did you like or dislike about it
-suggest some improvements to the course.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to give my feedback on the short course which was specially arranged for managers at the Hotel President on “Coaching” from 11th August for 2 days.
I and many of other attendees are jubilant with the course because of its contemporary content which is vital to understand for all managers. Moreover, the coach of this program was very intelligent person. The way he opted for presentation was well appreciable and owing to that we have cleared our all doubts.
Additionally, I would like to give valuable suggestions which would help you to plan such programs in better way. Although, all facilities and amenities at hotel were good, the food was very oily and spicy and due to which many of candidates felt uncomfortable after lunch. Furthermore, a venue was quiet away from city which was biggest hurdle for some attendees who came from outside to reach at destination. You should choose venue which is centrally located.
One again thank you so much for such informative course and I am sure my feedback and suggestions matter a lot to you.
Yours faithfully,
Smith John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 327, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the biggest'.
Suggestion: was the biggest
... a venue was quiet away from city which was biggest hurdle for some attendees who came from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97894736842 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94419001555 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1535045454 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157964417905 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625498607824 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584878170596 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103919979233 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507870124783 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.