Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
The crowded cities have a major traffic jam problem ,one way to solve this issue is moving enterprises and firms to the suburb area .Personally I assume this method could have many side effects and must many activities have done before taking this approach .In the following I am going to explain the pros and cons of this aspect .
Firstly, by moving giant companies, their employees who live in city centre have to commute sometime to attend in their job although they could move their home near to their new job location
In this case some people who do not want to change their house location maybe because of they are used to that neighbourhood or their families live nearby. These proportion of people need public transportation to be comfortable in commuting.
Secondly, the government have to build fundamental services such as police station, fire department or even grocery stores because if somebody in those companies need something they don’t have to travel to city centre, it would not make sense.
Further more there should be built some entertaining facility for people who live in residential area . in near the recent moved companies .This decision will cost a lot of money .
On the contrary the suburb area will be developed and economy of the residents who live there will be improved because of the commuters .the reason is the commuters need different services and these services could be provided by people who live in nearby ,for example taxi driver or small shops
In a nutshell, the main reason of traffic of big cities are enterprises and by moving them to other part of the town the problem would nit be solved and we just waste the time and money .There are many other solution that we could seek our answers in them such as widening the roads or reducing density of tall buildings
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81150159744 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46846802725 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.807485848 49.4020404114 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.142857143 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.7142857143 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250865367684 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100641129173 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630397294671 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111529770635 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477550530094 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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