Your friend has recently written to you to find out about your college. Letter to your friend:
why you chose this college
what you like most about your college and what you don’t like about your college;
would you recommend it to your friend to join your college.”
Dear Naina,
It's really great to hear from you after such a long time. I'm great, i hope you and your family are also doing fine.
As you asked, i am going to tell you about my college in this letter mainly. So i chose this college because this was recommended to me by one of my school teachers, whose son got his degree from here, and i must say that it was the best advice i have ever received from anyone. I love everything about this college, such as the quality of education, study material, sports facility, library and culture. As i am pursuing my graduation here in Social Studies, this college has so many links with external organisations, where we often go to collect practical samples for our projects and assignments, and trust me its a once in a lifetime experience and would help us at the workplace in the future. Further, the infrastructure is quite modern with all the necessary tools and facilities for the students access to them conveniently.
I think i have answered all the basic questions that would help you to decide if you want to enroll in this college, and personally speaking, it is the best college to attain high-grade education.
Please write me back if i miss anything.
Best regards.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-09-08 | nainsi1991@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2020-09-08 | nainsi1991@gmail.com | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o hear from you after such a long time. Im great, i hope you and your family are a...
^^
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...m you after such a long time. Im great, i hope you and your family are also doing...
^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y are also doing fine. As you asked, i am going to tell you about my college i...
^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut my college in this letter mainly. So i chose this college because this was rec...
^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...whose son got his degree from here, and i must say that it was the best advice i ...
^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ports facility, library and culture. As i am pursuing my graduation here in Socia...
^
Line 5, column 615, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... projects and assignments, and trust me its a once in a lifetime experience and wou...
^^^
Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e education. Please write me back if i miss anything. Best regards. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69724770642 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67460696753 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.981985997 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257596787141 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915682520427 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975659746628 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130073335809 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765068063313 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.