Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?
The migration of people from village areas to cities is quite common nowadays, and they often leave their parents behind. This may cause traffic congestion and increase health issues among these migrants who live in miserable conditions just to earn their livings. There are a number of solutions which can be implemented in order to deter people from moving to the cities.
To begin with, this escalating number of movements has resulted in a population explosion in city areas, and as a consequence, the living situations have deteriorated, as people are often residing in small congested flats with the zero ventilation, which impacts their health drastically and causes several illnesses such as, Asthma, lung infection and many more. Furthermore, the traffic situation in cities has also impacted exponentially, as the roads are crowded and usually blocked during peak hours like in the morning and evening when people travel to or returning back to their offices.
The lack of quality education and employment prospects in the rural areas are the prime reasons why several people choose to settle in cities. When these opportunities are made available in their home places, they would not have any reason to take this step to leave their homes. To be precise, the government should invest some funds in infrastructure development in the rural areas, and promote high-grade universities to open their branch there. Furthermore, if the administration waives the taxes of organizations who establish its business in these backward areas, this will create many job opportunities for the local people. For instance, many factories and small mills are moving to the countryside these days because they are getting subsidies from the government.
In conclusion, while the migration of the young generation from their native place to cities has untoward repercussions such as congested roads and health hazards, the government can take necessary steps to curb this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...ng and evening when people travel to or returning back to their offices. The lack of quali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36858974359 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84584883732 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4968933249 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.272727273 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217285359676 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765724704713 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331987311342 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13199058896 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297758498318 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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