Some people argue that preventing of health issues and diseases is better than treating them and hence the government should allocate appropriate budget for it. Personally I totally agree this view due to the fact that it will bring us many benefits to our lives.
In long terms of preventing health issues and diseases, it will help maintain a healthy lifestyle and save a lot of money on medical expenses in the future. If the government spends more money on promoting prevention methods, it can encourage people to have a good and stress free life. In other words, if a person would like to live a healthy life, he needs to prevent himself from indulging bat habits like eating fast food… That is a reason why the authority should hold accountable for investing in highlighting benefits of healthy lifestyles by launching health awareness campaigns.
Apart from that, if the national state gives more importance towards highlighting advantages of prevention methods, it can help people not only save lots of money on medical expenses but also avoid much serious diseases being appeared. The government plays a vital role in encourage individuals to do sports and regular exercises in order to stay healthy as well as keep fit. Moreover, because of by taking prevention measures, people will not fall ill, thus saving money would otherwise have been spent on medical treatment. For an example, India is successful in the decreasing 10% of cigarette revenue through launching health awareness campaigns.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the authority should have a responsibility to allocate money on health problems and diseases prevention as it will help them live healthier and happier.
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 84
- Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can get so much information through the Internet and study just as well at home To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extend do you agree 89
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- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17689530686 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77467766842 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7380824491 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203670694273 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782245327431 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323063070462 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126948723366 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203209237118 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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