Nowadays, most parents have to go on official tours. Therefore, they spend a lot of time away from their family. What are the effects of this trend for the parents who go on tours and the rest of the family?
Nowadays, many companies are offering business trips to their employee for the company’s betterment. Therefore, most people have to visit different place for their business and jobs. However, employees have to leave their loved ones for long time. I think this trend leads to many negative impacts on their family and children.
Firstly, people who travel a lot for business purpose which affects their children the most. To explain, parents who travel regularly they cannot spend quality time with their children during this trip. However, they can have conversations virtually but face to face conversations and give more quality time for children added more values. as result, these children spend more time with their modern virtual games such as playing pubg game instead of playing sports and reading books. Thus, their physical and mental developments get affected. For example, my friend Nayan has a child and he is single parent. He often go abroad for 2 to 4 weeks in every 3 months for his business purpose. He cannot spend quality time with his child during these trips. Therefore, his child has an addiction to playing virtual games in mobiles and computers which is not standard for his age.
Secondly, spending less time with family results in a broken relationship. People who travel regularly, sometimes they involve in the extramarital affairs to overcome loneliness and results in divorce. This separation of parents not only affect their counterparts but also spoils the children’s life. For instance, a recent report published in TIMES OF INDIA stated that the divorce rate is increased to 45% from the last decade due to spending less time with their loved ones because of the extramarital affairs during the business trips.
In conclusion, regular traveller always should take care of their family and children and keeping touch with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ty time for children added more values. as result, these children spend more time ...
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...child and he is single parent. He often go abroad for 2 to 4 weeks in every 3 mont...
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Line 3, column 878, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ters which is not standard for his age. Secondly, spending less time with family...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21854304636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55083829723 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6576286494 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283168291124 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948753265766 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466729772778 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163539188967 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521783670706 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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