In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think it is a negative or positive situation?
These days, many people prefer to buy their own dwelling places instead of renting one. The main reason for this could be the saving of money for future endeavors and in my perspective, it a positive trend as through this people can have a secure life.
To begin with, the crucial reason for owning a house is the saving of money. This is because the fares of rental apartments and buildings are skyrocketing and many people tend to believe that every month’s rent could be utilized for the EMI’s of a new house. For instance, in metropolitan cities, the average rent for a three-bedroom flat is 40000 INR per month which can easily be converted to the monthly installments of 80 lacks flat. As a result, people can utilize these saved expenses for fulfilling other aspirations such as traveling abroad, high-class education to children, and setting up their own business.
Although purchasing a house needs a commitment and a stupendous financial status, in my opinion, it is a positive trend owing to the security it provides for the future. My viewpoint is bolstered by the fact that shelter is one of the main necessities of life and investment in property tends to provide a secure environment and broader thinking for other desires. The reason for this is that there is a sharp surge in inflation and everything is getting expensive ranging from education to travel. Therefore, if a person owns a house, he holds less stress for the study and dreams of their offspring.
In conclusion, despite the huge capital investment, purchasing a house is more preferred as it is more economical and saves money. In my viewpoint, it is a better situation for a secure future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87456445993 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80944722737 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.675372286 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219295725904 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084044118784 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423701487558 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13783779065 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638817400517 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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