Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also negative effects. Do the disadvantages of having mobile phones outweigh the advantages?
The used of gadget give more useful effect to our daily activity. I support the side that the benefits of gadget are bigger than drawback ones.
First of all, some parents said that gadget gives negative effect to their children. The technology in their gadget always make the new update to all the application inside. So, the game will be improving from time to time and give something new to the game. This situation make their children are lazy to study and will make their children have a horrible social life.
On the another hand, nowadays technology keep developing. Everyone can't leave their gadget in along of time. Firstly, in this pandemic many people change their payment from using cash to a cashless era. This way can prevent the spread of the virus by reduce touch to others. A gadget hold on a big effect to stop this pandemic in the world.
Secondly, gadget is something that must be had by all people. Much of problem can be done by using gadget. For example, if you don't know about something, you can find it with your gadget by using google so you willl know every detail of it. It is show that gadget is very useful and helpful to our daily life.
Although some parents hate to give their children using gadget due to the negative effect but as we know that gadget give us a lot of advantagesto our daily life. The modern technology help us to pay with cashless and make hard things easy to find out just using googlein our own gadget. Lastly, technology will be useful when you use itu on a good way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ys technology keep developing. Everyone cant leave their gadget in along of time. Fi...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ne by using gadget. For example, if you dont know about something, you can find it w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53597122302 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18821260769 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2051115779 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0555555556 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0486307924719 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171743446933 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236616067666 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0313156941126 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205966822007 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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