In today's world people think that time is money and motion is progress. I am totally concurred with the idea that People are running towards money and materialistic lifestyle because of which though there are abundant means of communications, they do not have time to have conversation with their parents. I firmly believe that people are not communicating with each other like before they used to do as their life is hectic and busy. I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, youths visit different country to enhance their knowledge and ability in broad sector and have physical distance with their relatives. The world clock is different in time and day which varies from one country to another according to the Greenwich line. If it's ten AM in the morning in one place, it may be two AM in other place. As a result, it is really hard to communicate with people. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. I have been in USA for two years and circumstances is different than I was in my country to talk with my nearest people. When it's time to wake up for me, people from my country have time to sleep. Consequently, though I want to have conversation but the situation does not allow me.
Secondly, Society has transformed in the name of modernization and industrialization. Moreover, self centered attitude has changed the brotherhood in the society. To be specific, people are running towards money for materialistic lifestyle and they do not have time to think about other people to commute their happiness and misery with each other. As a result, people only want to talk in a serious business than spending time in hello, hi communication. In my experience, about five years ago, my friends went to Australia for her job. Before going there, she used to talk with her family twice a day in a phone call. On the contrary, she works seven days a week for ten hours per day as much as she can. Unfortunately, she does not have time to talk to her friends and family. Now a days, she only talks once a month if she has any important issues to share. It shows that today's generations are running towards sophisticated lifestyle rather than valuing their relationships.
Finally, law is another factor effecting to have conversation. To elaborate, when pro-genie become eighteen, they are allowed to leave their home and stay alone. Over the time, they love to stay without any disturbance as they call it freedom. Independent life makes people to forget their social bounding with family and consequences for less communication. Though there are ample means of communication accessed in the world but people spend time using social medias, watching movies or series.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly support that lack of time, long distance relationship, law, materialistic lifestyle are the major factors that people do not give company to there family as they used to in the past.
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- Nowadays we communicate less with our family members To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Television advertising directed toward young children aged two to five should not be allowed 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to do as their life is hectic and busy. I will develop these ideas in the subsequ...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...rding to the Greenwich line. If its ten AM in the morning in one place, it may be two AM in other...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...wo years and circumstances is different than I was in my country to talk with my nea...
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Line 5, column 781, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...time to talk to her friends and family. Now a days, she only talks once a month if she has...
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Line 5, column 785, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... to talk to her friends and family. Now a days, she only talks once a month if she has...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2500.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85436893204 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84038845571 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487378640777 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.69568539 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3928571429 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12682717213 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363924426422 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053220870911 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796910196669 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300262024796 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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