In today's world, people are inventing abundant technologies to devise easier life. To be specific, it is easy to fulfill the basic needs of people comparing to the past. I am concurred with the idea that life is upgrading because of the technological development, research on different areas, easy access of primary sector like school, hospital, roads and means of communication. It is my farm belief that people should not work harder than before and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, industrialization has created job opportunity to work on different sectors which uplift employment rate of the world. It is good to say that people earn handsome money that allows them to run their family without facing any obstacles. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. My grand parents did not have any job because of the unavailability of works and they had to work on the field whole day to feed their five children. Although the food used to be sufficient but they did not have money to buy necessary goods for their family. But my parents started to be independent in their early twenties for a company and they fulfill my desire.
Secondly, development of technology changes people's lifestyle. Moreover, innovation of computer virtually changed impossible to possible. In addition, more people are working from their table to perceive information of different sectors which make possible for excessive use of knowledge. Ultimately, people can work faster and easier with the help of laptop using and getting ideas from many sources. As a result people should not be arduous like before as they complete almost their works rapidly and get time for recreational activities.
Finally, easy access of roads help to expand the transportation. Furthermore, people should not walk long miles for their basic needs and it is possible to travel from one place to another whenever they need. I remember, my brother used to walk for two hours to reach their school but when people expended the roads from school to our community, I always used vehicles to reach my school on time. I am fortunate to say that I saved more than three hours and used it for my study which my brother used to spend on walking for their education.
To sum up, modern technological invention and access of transportation are miracle to the human life which has made every thing achievable to complete with in no time. To the next, person should not forget the contribution of job market while remembering the easy life style in modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their family. But my parents started to be independent in their early twenties f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94318181818 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78762669727 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520454545455 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7177728066 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9523809524 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164724091553 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500728316647 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579036542134 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860569695351 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645755346166 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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