Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party

Dear John Earl,
Surprise to see my letter! Wait as I have more to tell you. Before, please tell me your doing well. My parents always speak about you and asked me to share their best wishes. Coming to the point, I have some good news and writing this letter to invite you for the upcoming Christmas house party. This year celebration theme is ‘Santa in Halloween’ where all of us wear costume related to either Christmas or Halloween.
After morning prayer, I have planned for feast and fun games with children. I am sure, kids like building snowman and playing with sledges but to fill some yuletide spirit I hired a person who can mimic a Santa Claus. Please join us a week before 25th December so that we can go for shopping and decorate house, Xmas tree with lightings. Ofcourse, there will be choir and firewood along with musical night for adults. Your suggestions are valuable to make this holiday even merrier.
Your presence brings joy not only to me but also to my family. Rohan my son is eager to meet you and planning for ice skating with you. I promise, that this vacation will be a nostalgic moment and an opportunity for us to know more about your recent achievements. Needless to say, that you miss your hometown but for time being be our guest to make most of this celebration.

Thank you

Yours Friendly,
Grisham.

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Average: 7.6 (15 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...etter! Wait as I have more to tell you. Before, please tell me your doing well. My par...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...ore to tell you. Before, please tell me your doing well. My parents always speak abo...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35884858918 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8765674996 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217475365431 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823951340824 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656187252706 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136808666952 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625575249979 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.