Some people think that in this modern world, getting old is entirely bad. However, other people believe that the life of old people is much better now than it was in the past. Discuss both views.
now a days ,there is an ongoing debate among people that getting old in these modern society is entirely bad while others
tend to believe that old people's life is much easier now than previously.However,I strongly admit that old people's life is better now.In this essay,I will explain my point of view by any losing both sides of the argument and lead to a plausible conclusion.
there are a myriad of reasons in favour of stance.The most preponderant one is that
there are a lot of aged care facilities all over the world.old people can live there and they do not have to cook or clean.Moreover,Governtment do assist the senior citizens financially,so they don't have to stress about money. In addition,they can make a lot of friends of their same age and they can socialize with them.
On the other hand,it can also can not we ignore that Elderly people feel lonely in modern society.Because other young family members are busy online in playing games and particularly in social media for example,Facebook and Tik tok.Therefore,they do not pay much attention to old people.
In a view of the arguments outlined above ,one can conclude that despite having some benefits of getting older,the drawbacks are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98564593301 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29854946327 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655502392344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.319323963 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.4 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361504456837 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160189777637 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178465361301 0.0667982634062 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164465052731 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143192397347 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.