Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. What extent agree or degree?
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background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">It is often argued that in the majority of cosmopolitan societies, individuals from different communities prefer to live together which brings more merits to the society than its demerits. this essay partially agree with this trend and reasons form the same are scrutinized below with examples.
background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">To begin with, the primary positive side of the notion is people can enjoy and get knowledge from a diversity of culture. Indeed each culture have their own significance, traditional values and unique cultural festivals which are profoundly attached with plethora of ancient legacies. also, they can neither only assist each other to celebrate their functions but also get a chance to increase brotherhood between them. Consequently, they can improve their background with the taste of numerous holistic books. For example, India is one of the diverse democratic countries where persons from distinct background live altogether and celebrate all festival together irrespective of their religion.
background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">On the other hand, a clan of masses who have a holistic nature finds always an obligation to follow other religion’s spirituality. this is because they believe that by strictly adhering to only one commodity they are honouring their lord and their ethics. For instance, in many Asian islands, local people do not allow any person from other religion in their area as they have a fear of extinct of virtues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 7.40247678019 5.12529762239 144% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.85571515763 2.80592935109 173% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.635290643 49.4020404114 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.25 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0278788162765 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135277015586 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0146701485669 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228911057284 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304516137227 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 25.94 12.4159519038 209% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 24.5 9.78957915832 250% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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