Clothes are an integral part of today's society. They are preceived and judged as a person's appearance. However, clothes worn vary as per occasion and activities particiapted and not all clothes are acceptable for every scenario. For example, wearing a party wear to a business meeting is considered disrespectful and wearing formal clothes are casual jogging is uncomfortable.
Namen is known for its high-end designer fashions and their claim to be better than their competitor is that as population and median income increase, people are willing to spend more money on clothing. Designer clothes are sought after by those interested in fashionable items and are keen to accessorize themselves, hence classifying it as a niche, albeit fashion is a widespread niche. However, clothes are bought to worn, and high end designer clothes are not everyday clothes, they are more viewed as party wear, gifts and holiday season wear. As the city of winston is a growing community, it implies bigger the community, festivities would increase in number and grander festivities would also become a increasing possibility. This promises that opening a store for Namen would imply increases sales only during holiday seasons etc.
However, high end fashion choices cannot be considered everyday clothes, this is where Roscoe would shine. Roscoe is known for more affordable fashion options suited for families as Roscoe's executives pointed out. A growing community might also mean busier everyday life which calls for relaxed, comfortable fashion choices. Furthermore, an individual would be change clothes more than once during a day as per the activity they perform, which means that there is an increased need for affordable everyday clothes. These scenarios proves that Roscoe would do well throughout the year and especially better than Namen during off seasons where festivities are lesser in numbers.
To conclude, Roscoe would maintain their sales throughout the year and would do better than Namen during the off season due to there be an increased in demand for everyday clothes. Not all clothes can be worn for every occasio and Roscoe's product line is suited for everyday life in compariosn to N
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1816 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.189 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.633 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.631 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.35 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.086 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ety. They are preceived and judged as a persons appearance. However, clothes worn vary ...
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Line 3, column 709, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d grander festivities would also become a increasing possibility. This promises t...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'prove'.
Suggestion: prove
...dable everyday clothes. These scenarios proves that Roscoe would do well throughout th...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 55.5748502994 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 350.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70886827789 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517142857143 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8563909804 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9375 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.70786347227 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315340383424 0.218282227539 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10748660613 0.0743258471296 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097362393484 0.0701772020484 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189717268204 0.128457276422 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941655197383 0.0628817314937 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.3799401198 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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