Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that.
Do you agree with this opinion?
It is argued that medical services should not be offered for free to any individual, irrespective of their financial capability, as it is personal neglect that leads to most ailments. I disagree with the argument as there are elderly people and accident victims who need medical care due to situations not really in their control and depending on their economic status, may need financial assistance.
Senior citizens are highly vulnerable and susceptible to diseases and may need to make a lot of hospital visits. As most of them would be retired by that age, without financial assistance from other sources, they will find it very difficult to avail the required medical services. Studies by the Indian Medical Association has shown that 85% of the elderly people who visit hospitals are reliant on various government schemes as they cannot afford to pay their medical bills. Therefore, making geriatric care free or highly subsidized is a necessary step that health authorities need to take.
Road or job related hazards are not events that are under anyone’s control. Depending on the severity of the incident, the expenses for treating the victim could be very high. As these are not planned for, the families of the victims may find it difficult to quickly arrange for funds to cover the treatment costs. An article in the Times of India showed that the hospital bills of 60% of the occupational hazards were more than 5 Lakh rupees and 80% of the victims couldn’t pay the amount that remained after Insurance provided by their employers. This, providing access to free medical care for travel or occupational mishaps is a necessity.
To conclude, despite the best efforts from people to maintain personal well being, there are situations where a hospital visit cannot be avoided and such a visit may throw up expenses that a person may not be able to afford. Free hospital services in such situation will relieve people from worrying about financial burden on top of their already worrying health issues.
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 73
- News stories on TV and in a newspaper are often accompanied by pictures Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words What is your opinion about this 67
- Some people believe that economic growth of any country reduces poverty and hunger while other think that it causes damage to the environment Discuss both the views and give your opinion 73
- First impressions are important Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job To what extent do you agree 78
- It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife while there are other problems that are more important Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or occupational mishaps is a necessity. To conclude, despite the best efforts fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0328358209 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61395402118 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546268656716 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1511277473 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.692307692 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226574302451 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786898032407 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655691479174 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136126970104 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428316064171 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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