In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Purchasing a house for most is a massive goal, which when completed, makes them feel like they have crossed a huge milestone in their lives. For citizens in many countries, it is essential to own a house whereas for others renting one seems like a better option. In this essay, I will elaborate on why is it considered vital to own a house and will also detail out why I believe it is not a such a good idea to buy a house.
For many the predominant reason to purchase a house is that it gives the owner a sense of security. Since the house belongs to them, the scare of being homeless in case of unforeseen circumstances is greatly minimized. Take for instance the current situation of living in a pandemic, people are losing their jobs and so it is getting hard for them to pay rents resulting in termination of their rental agreements and leaving the accommodation. Another significant reason for the difference in opinion in some countries is to do with the cost of living, that is, how much does it cost of renting instead of buying a house. If the cost is at par, people then prefer to have their own house. In Canada, the monthly cost of renting an apartment is as much as the monthly mortgage for a house. Due to these reasons, people find it important to buy their own place rather than rent out one.
Although the above reasons are convincing, I do not think that they are in a positive situation buying a house. The first major factor in my opinion is that such a huge purchase will put a huge financial burden on the owner. Not only will the owner have to worry about paying the hefty cost for the purchase, but if there is a loan attached, they will have to also pay the additional interest that accumulates on that amount. Some spend their entire lives paying off the bank’s loan and they can still lose the house if they are unable to keep up the installments.
In conclusion, for many reasons, people think owning a house is important, however factors like financial stability must be taken into account before making the biggest purchase of their life.
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Suggestion:
...are unable to keep up the installments. In conclusion, for many reasons, people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, whereas, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50529100529 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52617799528 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505291005291 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4518379614 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.533333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244203859313 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812104634875 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575567449779 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136537411269 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05825349376 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.