Some say that when a person achieves success in their job, it means that he/she is selfish and doesn’t care about others. Do you agree or disagree?
It goes without saying that success is imperative for a majority of workers, and it is said that after being successful, one becomes self-centred. However, I do not agree with this opinion, and will explain why.
Firstly, it is pivotal to understand that success at the workplace has little to do with selfishness, because one may not even become successful, yet still remain self-focussed throughout his life. For instance, in Middle-east nations a substantial number of the working class, who are yet to climb up the career ladder are obsessed only about their well being, and pay no attention to the problems of others. Secondly, it would not be wrong to say that the more a working professional achieves career milestones, the more helpful he becomes, and this is paramountly due to increasing income associated with career success. In fact, working class with superior positions are found to be involved in philanthropic activities compared to below-average employees, as we see that many CEOs and managers usually support the underprivileged sections of the society in India by donating in charity. This is because a bigger pay cheque would allow them to spend more for the benefit of society besides being a source of immense help for family members and extended relatives. Finally, no one would deny that success at the workplace is a combination of selfless attributes such as decreased family time, minimal social life, and lending unwavering support for the company during hard times (in case a company witnesses a difficult financial year).
Of course, a certain percentage of the successful working class tend to become selfish after making it big in professional life. However, this behaviour could be the result of poor brought up from a very young age, or selfish peers and social circles after turning adults in many other cases.
To conclude, it seems that the aforementioned reasons are compelling enough to rule out the opinion that attaining success at work leads to selfish behaviour. This is not to say that every successful individual is selfless, but it appears to be the case very frequently.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 459, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more working'?
Suggestion: a more working
..., it would not be wrong to say that the more a working professional achieves career milestones...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in fact, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12643678161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89572488655 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577586206897 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0399766445 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.666666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126895871498 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049725371547 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286203166626 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085223564588 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109482038343 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 459, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more working'?
Suggestion: a more working
..., it would not be wrong to say that the more a working professional achieves career milestones...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in fact, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12643678161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89572488655 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577586206897 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0399766445 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.666666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126895871498 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049725371547 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286203166626 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085223564588 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109482038343 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.