It is critically important that we learn as much as possible and thrive in all of their classes. Personally, I believe that young people nowadays do not have as much respect for their teachers compared to the past. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, there are many more ways for students to learn nowadays which means they are less reliant on teachers than in the past. Few years ago, children could only learn new skills by going to schools and attending classes, so they respected their teachers a lot. In contrast, now they can easily use technology to learn independently.
My personal experience is a compelling example of this. For the past six years, I have been studying English almost every single day. Although my native language is Mongolian, I am able to communicate in English without feeling anxiety. I expand my vocabulary by using a smartphone application that teaches my three new phrases everyday, and I practice my pronunciation by watching videos on the Internet. Consequently, I feel old-fashioned class with a teacher is not as important as they used to be. If I wanted to learn English twenty years ago, I would have dependent on teachers and respected them a lot.
Furthermore, I feel the quality of teachers has been decreasing. At present there are a lot more teachers than there were in the past, as quantity rises quality diminishes. Requirements of the teachers are low compared to fifty years ago. For instance, I started learning English on my own because I felt my English teacher’s knowledge was not enough. She was teaching courses I already knew five years prior. Moreover, ninety percent of my teachers were like that, I only had one teacher I respected a lot. He was my math teacher, he was old, professional, and had a very efficient way of teaching. In addition, I discussed with my parents about these modern day teachers, they thought the same with me. Since then, I have not respected the majority of my teachers at all. My classmates have picked up my behavior, and have started not respecting teachers as well. Based on this experience, I strongly feel that young people do not respect educators like they did in the past.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that children do not respect their teachers as they used to. This is because teachers are not essential as they were a few decades ago, and their quality of teaching has been decreasing overtime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ation that teaches my three new phrases everyday, and I practice my pronunciation by wat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83490566038 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7889766737 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504716981132 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9917320674 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.96 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285568982773 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086538811573 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795039984822 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187293740958 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599985750282 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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