Dear Eason Chan,
I attended your concert last Saturday and your great performance is still looping in my mind. The most wonderful part of your concert was when you were riding on a bicycle round the stage and singing one of your great songs “the bicycle”. Your sound, the dancer, lighting and stage effects were ideally integrated and fully expressed the emotion and words of this song. Your concerts always have unexpected idea making all the audiences surprised and impressive. I am already expecting you next tour.
As your loyal fans, I like to listen your songs whenever I am. Recently, I started to learn guitar, dreamed one day I could play all your songs. I know you also played guitar very well as you have done a guitar live show month ago in your YouTube channel, could you give me some tips on playing guitar, especially any special skills when playing difficult chords, like F major?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Samuel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8630952381 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34266083914 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690476190476 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8973288219 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265045801426 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10479892734 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517518860919 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177063918786 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276407686228 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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