You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend In your letter:
Thank your friend for the holiday
Explain that you left your wallet in their house
Give them instructions on how to send it back to you.
Dear Jane,
Hope you’re doing good.
I had a wonderful time at your place in Goa. Thank you very much for inviting me over for a week of fun just like old times. I need a favor from you though.
I just found out after I returned home that I misplaced my wallet in your house. I’m pretty sure it should be there in the side table next to the bed in my room. I need it back urgently as it contains my Driving License without which I’ll not be able to drive around town.
Would you find the wallet and send it to me at my address at the earliest? Go ahead and avail the express courier service. I’ll cover the expenses you incur for sending the wallet back to me.
Please do send me the pics from our trip to the beaches and casinos in Goa.
Hoping to hear from you soon,
Jarin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at I misplaced my wallet in your house. I’m pretty sure it should be there in the...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... side table next to the bed in my room. I need it back urgently as it contains my...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93930805 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651612903226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2695556946 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.25 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9166666667 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.166666666667 4.34317383033 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254856734065 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091423272567 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066858429574 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125524303557 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789844291684 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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