You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback , participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel ,but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch .
Write a letter to the manager of the Hotel, In your letter
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel
- explain why they were unhappy about the food.
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is ABC, and I am working with Softenic India Pvt Ltd as HR Manager. I would like to thank you on behalf of our company for your great support for hosting the All-day-meet at your hotel "Lemon Tree" which took place last week on September 23rd. For the last four years we are conducting all our corporate meetings at your hotel because it has gained a great reputation in the hotel industry for its service, food and the ambience. Unfortunately, this time our participants did not like the food, as it was expected.
I must mention they pretty much liked everything about the hotel, including its hygiene and cleanliness, great customer service and also the conference room, where the event was conducted. We also liked the arrangements in terms of the Wi-Fi connectivity, and the high-tech equipments.
However, when it came to food that we were served, it was not tasting fresh. Some of our participants mentioned that the cottage cheese dish was overcooked. Besides, the starters when served tasted cold, seems they were not prepared fresh, just microwaved. Anyway, I just want to inform you that kindly have a food check done before any event is planned. You can also inform the chefs to check this while serving food to our customers.
I am hoping that in the next event the food quality will be improved.
Yours faithfully
ABC
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- You recently organised an all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel In their feedback participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the 92
- You recently organised an all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel In their feedback participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...it came to food that we were served, it was not tasting fresh. Some of our participants mention...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68778619105 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636752136752 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8001600541 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6923076923 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351051759121 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978009280198 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912128820045 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157125826122 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120593490363 0.0580467560999 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.