In this advanced and scientific world, modern gadgets have influenced human minds to a great extent, especially the children. The present scenario witnesses the children spending a lot of time playing computer games. I strongly disagree with the notion as it has a bad impact on their physical as well as intellectual efficiencies.
To support this, we can say that children tend to face many health issues by playing computer games. Gone are the days when children used to play in the open parks and gardens near their homes. The computer games have brought this trend to an end. Nowadays, children simply use to sit at their homes and play computer games. Sometimes, this leads to vision problems as they continuously fix their eyes on the screen. They keep on sitting at one particular place without any physical activities and consequently become victims to fatigue and obesity. They even skip their meals in order to play games. At this grooming age, when they ignore food, they can have less nutrients than the sufficient amount required for their bodies for proper growth and development.
Moreover, playing computer games can also hinder their academics capabilities. They spend maximum amount of their time in playing computer games rather than sparing some time for their studies. They least bother about the home assignments given to be done at home and as a result they get very low grades in their academics. If they would not be intellectually strong they would not be able to achieve their targets set for their career and future. This can make them feel guilty and embarrassed in front of their parents and teachers who have lot of expectations from them. Furthermore, they would feel less confident and insulted by not doing good in their academics as their future is totally based on it.
To recapitulate, we can say that children are more likely to spend their quality time playing computer games which can have a great drawbacks towards their health and intellectual abilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... issues by playing computer games. Gone are the days when children used to play in ...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...nd to an end. Nowadays, children simply use to sit at their homes and play computer...
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Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun nutrients is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e, when they ignore food, they can have less nutrients than the sufficient amount re...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'They the least'.
Suggestion: They the least
...an sparing some time for their studies. They least bother about the home assignments given...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'drawback'?
Suggestion: drawback
...g computer games which can have a great drawbacks towards their health and intellectual a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01497005988 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58783281873 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559880239521 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3822467109 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202996861899 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860587230725 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795124785993 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153671816918 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355648124208 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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