These days, children tend to spend a great deal of time playing computer games. Some believe this is a beneficial trend while others think it is detrimental.
In the last decades, millions of pupils are interested in playing video games on the computers. Some people argue it is unacceptable due to the addiction effects. While others believe it is essential for children brain activities. However, I consider that computer games are preferable to reduce depression level.
To begin with, the video games might lead pupils to become addicted to play repeatedly. Firstly, the games offer various levels, which can affect children become curious to play until to the highest level. For instance, the flappy bird games that have been widely played by the pupils all around the world, those who have addicted owing to a sense of pleasure with the games.
On the other hand, playing games can help children's brain development. The games are able to encourage children in creativity, and logical thinking. Those are the beneficial skills which are provided in games. Besides, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ in problem-solving skills and critical thinking. Furthermore, I believe that children who are in favor of video games can help to concentrate and relieve stress. some children experience games such as “Nintendogs” are able to take care of something of their own. Some children play video games if they are emotionally hurting.
To sum up, it is obvious that playing computer games is able to increase delight, thinking, and decrease their level of stress. While other drawbacks are lower.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25210084034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8672584155 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1039437794 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.125 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186374220531 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774956574056 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463065824115 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126553830607 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344541597832 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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