Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century? at least 250 words
With the development of technology, a variety of products such as computers, Internet and transportation have been invented so far. Therefore, a number of people are optimistic about the 21st century and they believe that the development of technology gives people opportunities to make positive changes in the world. In my opinion, I absolutely agree that this background leads to a positive effect in the world because technology makes people live in comfortable life. Additionally, it helps people develop medical science.
To begin with, a multitude of products such as Internet and computer ha...
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Sentence: Therefore, a number of people are optimistic about the 21st century and they believe that the development of technology gives people opportunities to make positive changes in the world.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and opportunities
for they did not have medicines enough to cure them.
because they did not have enough medicines to cure them.
due to developed technology.
due to the developed technology.
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