{Quang Truong). People in many countries are spending less time with their family. Causes and solutions?
Family is always an indispensable part of every people. However, it seemed that individuals are spending just a fraction of time together with their family each day. This essay will analyze the causes and possible solutions for this phenomenon.
There are two main reasons for the restriction of time for family. Firstly, the fast pace of life in the modern world pulls people away in its hectic schedules, which eventually reduces meeting time for family members to only in the morning and late night. For example, my father goes to work in the early morning when sometime I have not even wakened up yet, and he comes home very late at night. Secondly, when people decide to move out from their parents and start their dependent lives away from home. Consequently, precious time with family will be decreased. For instance, students just able to come home on some big holidays of the year.
There are some potential solutions to tackle this problem. First, balance working and studying schedules. People Should plan out what to do in the week so that their tasks could be done quickly. Therefore, they will have more time to improve the family bond. Secondly, call the family more often. Thanks to the advantage of social media, they can talk with their family members at a far distance. ságbo individuals should have more conversations to enhance the quality of family time.
In conclusion, it is clear that hectic schedules and people moving away from home are the major causes of many people are spending less time with their family, and there are some solutions to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ságbo
...their family members at a far distance. ságbo individuals should have more conversati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88191881919 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38899042018 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7597851647 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8235294118 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346452587876 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101637281462 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926484356993 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24141000192 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917924823823 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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