Competition, which is considered to be beneficial for juveniles by a few masses, by the remaining ones, is claimed to be needless, and to cooperation, they support that for having more benefits, needs to be taught. In my opinion, although being a cooperative can have some advantages, in this case, the encouragement in terms of competition seems to be more advantageous.
To initiate in adolescents, the merits of adding the consciousness of competition. The first and foremost pro is hard work that leads to success. To elaborate, children who are animated by their teachers and parents regarding the competition are likely to work hard and in their school subjects such as mathematics, science, and others, may try to perform better than each other. To cite an example, getting admission in the reputed universities or colleges for being a doctor and engineer requires good performance not only in the academics but also in the competitive exams such as NEET and JEE due to competition.
On the other hand, for being cooperative also links with some benefits, teaching to children. Of bonding amongst them, the primary one is the strengthening. To explain, youngsters who keep on competing others are likely to be unable for making good relations with their peer groups that might be affecting negatively on their mental and physical health; however, with each other, the cooperative ones probably enhance the relations that leads to playing, eating, and studying together.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, though for making the strong bonding amongst them, the cooperation in children can be helpful, the competition seems to have more benefits due to making the juveniles more hard worker that links with success in the future.
- The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. 79
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can government make urban life better for everyone? 78
- Nowadays, people waste a lot of food that is bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 617, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uch as NEET and JEE due to competition. On the other hand, for being cooperative...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, regarding, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21276595745 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00657362048 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2970652901 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220246735316 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818295459638 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633146031245 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132071548619 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235342043693 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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