The chart below shows the participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia.
The bar chart shows the percentage of children and young people in Australia who take part in five different activities. It is clear that favourite activity for both boys and girls among this age group is watching TV or videos. Almost all children spend their free time in this way. However, in three of the four remaining activities, boys’ participation is greater the that of girls.
The least popular activity is skateboarding and rollerblading with only 40 percent of boys and 30 percent of girls engaged in it. Also girls show less interest than boys in bike riding and electronic or computer games, but still about two- thirds of Australian girls spend their time on these activities. Art and craft is the only activity that more well-liked by girl than boys. More than half of girls show interest in it compared to only 40 percent of boys.
A closer examination of the figures for girls’ participation reveals that they are less interested that boys in physical activities.
- Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical education classes in the curriculum for all school age children Others think that children s time is better spent on more academic subjects Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period 67
- The chart below shows the participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... and 30 percent of girls engaged in it. Also girls show less interest than boys in b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92215568862 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7148276854 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1590325708 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160878138319 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692552900644 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539445441857 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107698766516 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691978270015 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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